Pour Mortel!

This is my second critique .. I hope I do well .u.

Vision : The character catches your attention and your first impression is that this drawing is spectacular. The eyes look almost real, and the positioning of the limbs/body parts are brilliant. However, maybe if you improved the colour scheme, instead of having dark and bright colours. maybe just have one? Like instead of using red and orange, you could use brown and dark brown? Or instead of black and white, you could use very very white and grey? That sort of thing. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

Originality : Well, it is generally hard to make cat characters original, considering they are widely used through out dA and alot of sites. But you have done well with this on here <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

Technique : The way the glow comes out from the body is immpressive, it really suits the style.

Impact : Amazing. Like I said, it catches attention easily.

Hehe sorry it got shorter near the end, but just be glad I didn't ramble on and on xD

Ty for reading <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> Hope this is fair ;-;

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>